Friday, January 29, 2010
what would you miss the most if you went in hiding?
What i would miss the most if i went in hiding is my own house, all my personal belongings left behind. I wouls also miss being able to see my friends everyday, or even to go outside to see them, going outside for me in genreal would be hard. Can not go out to eat or go to the park or even just walk around and ride a skateboard.
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Nice paragraph! Make sure you run spell check and double check your work for typos. Also, go back and capitalize the "I's" when you are talking about yourself. The last sentence needs a subject (who cannot go out to eat, etc?). Even though we know this paragraph is about you, every sentence has to have a subject to make it complete.
ReplyDeleteGood job jumping right into class and figuring out what to do, by the way. :)
Beka